I was instructed on Twitter to write a story about technofromage and this is what I got in the 15 minutes I gave this exercise.

I really hope it gets Seq’d, I really want to know what the side affects are.

I’m not sure if I’m a fan of the present tense, but it doesn’t ruin the story in this case.

Truth be told, while I dig the present tense, I use it here because it takes fewer characters overall.

Side effects include headache, nausea, muscle spasms, and an inexplicable desire to flip out and kill people.

Very cool start!

I sure hope he isn’t lactose intolerant. That’ll just make the side effects that much worse!

Love the last line! Interesting idea.. getting instructions/inspiration via Twitter.

I realized quite belatedly that I never commented on this, even though I picked up the story myself two sequels hence. For stemming such a ridiculous genesis, I think this piece turned out very well.

I particularly like the woman’s voice (“your, you know, your brain”) and the nanites.

There’s always side effects.

Great writing! Love the casual tone, and that last line!