Starts with a positive tone, but gradually becomes more dark, more bitter – it actually reads as though the writer knows it’s impossible for the letter to go back in time, but writes it anyway – a desperate attempt to change past mistakes…

The line about their Mum really got me actually – don’t know what it was about it but it was very powerful. Moving.

Very much enjoyed this – a fantastic entry to the challenge… MH :)

Wonderful story! I also enjoyed the progression from light to dark as the story unfolded. Is this real, or just a story you made up (obviously the time travelling parts not, but otherwise)?