But if he doesn’t go back then he never could have sent the letter telling him not to go back. Which means he would go back. Which would mean he could send the letter, stopping himself from going… MIND POPS AS UNIVERSE IMPLODES Oh the joy of a good paradox, nice to see the letter included as part of a strong narrative with sequel opportunities – MH :)
But if he doesn’t go back then he never could have sent the letter telling him not to go back.
Which means he would go back. Which would mean he could send the letter, stopping himself from going…
MIND POPS AS UNIVERSE IMPLODES
Oh the joy of a good paradox, nice to see the letter included as part of a strong narrative with sequel opportunities – MH :)
Hilarious in its simplicity. That first bit especially was really nicely written, nice clean prose and good descriptions. I really liked the line about the optimistic spider. That was creative.
I love this already. Agree with THX – the optimistic spider is a nice touch.
um, yeah, my brain exploded too. i guess he just doesn’t go and dies happier.
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