A really nice bit of Shakespearean tragedy dialogue you’ve written here – obviously the Romeo reference is there which is a nice touch, but the actual use of language is very strong in getting across a fairly typical bit of high school melodrama – good work and thanks for entering! MH :)

I’m with MH. I love the usage of the language in a modern-day context.

I loved how you wrote it as a script, and like a true Shakespearian, there’s very little stage direction, leaving the visual aspect open to interpretation.