Regaining the narrative precision of the first piece, this was a brilliant ending – the fact that his own conviction was the balancing act, not the murders themselves was a brilliant and clever twist…

There isn’t enough legal flair on Ficly – more stories like this would make for some cracking reads! MH :)

poor little innocent girls :(

Great description of the court scene without making it a description of a court scene. Nicely balanced so even without reading the prequel I could tell what was going on but still appreciate your protagonist’s state of mind and where his thoughts were. Great little bit of story.