Oh god. I didn’t get it at first but then I read the title. Then I imagined it in my head and got sick. Very nicely done.

: D thanks so much!!

This is terrifying. UGGGHGHGHG (chills down my back)

I hate needles in general, but needles in eyes…

I think it would be more effective without the title. “Vision” is subtle enough to be more suspenseful I think, instead of going right out for the eyes in the title.