Sorry if I put a downer on the series, but my brain kept nagging at me about how his suit was called Jessica for a reason . . .

i think it is touching that he would honor his wife’s memory, knowing that he could go down any day.

Like the story I wrote about a teacher with hurt feelings turning out to be a killer robot, I love how ficly stories can branch off into directions that are wildly different from the roots.

I liked it as an explanation of the character’s resolve and motivation, always an important element in a story. And always cool to add your two bits onto a series or ficly, what the site is all about.