Comments on The Nerd Wrangler by Nathaniel Payne

2Nice

Ha! Utterly hilarious in a dark sorta way. Great work.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
H.S. Wift

Man, this guy’s definition of nerd is loose. Me, my sister and my brother are all nerds, and we couldn’t do that. I know a guy who could and he ent a nerd. Psycopath written all over.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
thebetweenspace

Nice. I love the last line. Until then, I thought maybe the guy was recruiting nerds for some arbitrary reason. Very funny, in a dark way, premise.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Mostly Harmless

Ouch. Why would you want to murder poor, innocent nerds? Some personal grudge?

Either way, you write dark humour really well, and I’ll be interested to see where this one goes!

My only nitpick: do you mean ‘fitted’ instead of ‘fit’ in the first sentence? MH :)
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Nathaniel Payne

Nope, definitely ‘fit’.

http://www.google.com/search?q=“fit+the+profile”
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Jim Stitzel

“Fit the profile” could be geographic, I suppose. It’s definitely good grammar.

Enjoyable story. I love the dark conclusion.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Jonathan D. Page

Noooo, that’s not a nerd. That’s a geek.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5