Okay, that middle paragraph, the big one, got really hard to follow. I think it’s partially due to the run-on sentence, but also due to what you were trying to get across in a s few words as possible, something about the time course of things, her possible involvement or culpability, and the mystery of his death. It seemed to point to her, so it was a twist that she didn’t do it, though that did take a little of the mystery out of it. Overall, as I think it evident, I’m mixed on this one. Neat stuff, but the execution left some details missing.
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