I like the way you’ve taken another perspective with this one – it feels a lot more direct and to the point than it’s predecessor and I like that… She’s obviously a smart one as well as a beauty, and whoever her assailant is, he’s deliciously sleazy and all-round nasty! Good work, well-written – MH :)
I like the way you’ve taken another perspective with this one – it feels a lot more direct and to the point than it’s predecessor and I like that…
She’s obviously a smart one as well as a beauty, and whoever her assailant is, he’s deliciously sleazy and all-round nasty!
Good work, well-written – MH :)
Thank you so much for the comment >_< I’m trying to write in the point of view of a sociopath and a victim~ We already know how this story ends (actually ahaha I’m writing it backwards). There is no happy ending or resolve. Just a Gun and four rounds. That was a hint~
Thank you so much for the comment >_<
I’m trying to write in the point of view of a sociopath and a victim~
We already know how this story ends (actually ahaha I’m writing it backwards). There is no happy ending or resolve. Just a Gun and four rounds.
That was a hint~
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