A carefully thought-out poem! Oh yes, I love poetry. I like the flow—there’s no jarring, non-conforming words in there. Well done. :D Also, I’m glad the ‘I’ got over the girl.
A carefully thought-out poem! Oh yes, I love poetry.
I like the flow—there’s no jarring, non-conforming words in there. Well done. :D
Also, I’m glad the ‘I’ got over the girl.
Thanks so much for the feedback! =) I have to say though, when this was written a while back, there was no real direction! Essentially, it wrote itself
Thanks so much for the feedback! =)
I have to say though, when this was written a while back, there was no real direction! Essentially, it wrote itself
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