This is also a sequel to ‘The Path Home’ (http://ficly.com/stories/15476) but I didn’t see a way to enter it in this challenge and make it a sequel. Anyhow, reading ‘Path’ might make one appreciate this story more.

Works well as both a sequel, and on it’s own. Great entry.

Works perfectly well as a standalone piece, fits the challenge criteria well – a nice, affectionate twist…

Good work on building perceptions and then changing them so quickly – it’s a skill! MH :)

This works perfectly well as a standalone story – well told with a clever, affectionate twist…

Good work on building perceptions and then changing them so quickly – it’s a skill! MH :)

I pictured Pocahontas’ sister.. :)
Nicely done!

Very interesting take on the challenge.

Intriguing scenario and a neat set of characters with which your working, the sister, the dangerous huntress, and the romancer. Cool story idea and nicely written as well.