Ah, a future subject to change by the actions of the reader.
Interesting.
Now I wonder about your italicized and emboldened phrases. Are those actually written down because the writer experienced the same things? Or are they the reactions of the reader to the letter and not actually written down?
The content of the letter I do find a little bit of a cliche I’m afraid. Perhaps you should have focused on making the letter a more personal? Remember that this is a letter between the same people, so the content would be a little cryptic to outside readers.
I love the style of this, it’s an engaging read, and amusing. I agree with Third Robot that the contents could be more personal, are those really the most important things to mention? I like the touch of setting it in the future, is to you now, or a past you?
@The Third Robot: Well, those are the action of the present me. So I thought I’ll just separate it from the letter by bolding or italicizing it. It’s written by the future me, so I made the letter be shown through the reading of the present me.
@Lighty: Well, I’m more of like stressed out by exams and literature, so I mentioned the both of them. Also, this is to the present me, written by a girl older by a year. :D
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