All this doomsday stuff always scares me. Not that I necessarily think it’s true, I just don’t like the idea of the world ending…I think I may end up in hell so I’d like to stay alive for a while =]

That said, I really like this piece. I’m wondering what the terrorist attack was…

I think that the whole doomsday thing is very fun to play with and write stories about, however in this one you mention an apocalyptic war and foreshadow a whole bunch but nothing really seems to happen.

After reading the sequel to this story I think that it made this one seem rather pointless and the other story would have stood out just fine on its own without this one.