Man, didn’t see that coming, a great story in spite of the variation to how I played the characters, ie. the names completely alliterated, or Appendix is utterly useless. But I do feel these people, heck, I’d kill the a-holes who called me useless.

I was playing along with body part functions. The appendix does burst from time to time doesn’t it?

Oh yes – I suffered at the hands of my appendix!

Starts as appendicitis which is just like a rumbling, but the real danger is perritinitis, which is when the appendix ruptures, releasing dangerous toxins into the blood stream – the horror!

Good work here, although I did miss the alliterative names… MH :)

I had made my names more descriptive than alliterative, but in the spirit of keeping it a more accurate sequel, I have made editations.

I like them better now anyways.

You have elected to make an awesome sequel. Not only have you made a kick-ass story, but you made it coherent, and that’s what sequelling is all about. I didn’t think about the appendix thing, definitely a very clever story. I really liked the thing about Coccyx being inseperable from Spine. Awesome telling.

that was perfect! great mimicry of Swift!

I am entertained!