Karma’s a bitch isn’t it? I enjoyed this, however, for the sake of consistency, I think that perhaps you should italicize “thank goodness”. I like your subway personification and how you describe “old” smell. I think you may have foreshadowed a little to much. A little more surprise could have been better I think.
Karma’s a bitch isn’t it?
I enjoyed this, however, for the sake of consistency, I think that perhaps you should italicize “thank goodness”.
I like your subway personification and how you describe “old” smell.
I think you may have foreshadowed a little to much. A little more surprise could have been better I think.
The Third Robot