nice segway into the reveal!
Aww! I love where this is going. I’d better get first copy of the published book :)
The dialogue flows really well. I note a connection between your icon and the name of the story. This is fiction, isn’t it?
Haha, yes! This is entirely fiction.
ElshaHawk (LoA)
Conjoiner, Rejoinder, Poisoner, Concealer, Revelator [[Wednesday]]
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Charlie K