King of the lake. Master of his domain. Emperor of the fishing hole.
I enjoyed this.
However, it did seem a little bit underdeveloped. I’m under the impression that he’s the king of what I had previously mentioned. If this is case, then I think you should have elaborated on the characters passion for fishing.
If not, then it was pretty random and I don’t get it at all.
It’s about the mythical Fisher King and King Arthur. Sword from the lake and all that. Wanted to keep it a bit lighter than the myths, though, and update it slightly while retaining a sort of ethereal quality.
Well I completely missed that. Ha! Oh well I liked it regardless. The fact that I was so unfamiliar with the King Arthur Story and such and still got something from it, albeit something much different, demonstrates your writing ability.
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