Comments on Introducing Victor by Mostly Harmless

Mr.Gabriel

Principal’s kids are always crazy in some way…
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
H.S. Wift

This’d make an intriguing adition to our class, good work.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Violet Turner

I LOVE THIS CHARACTER! Bravo, MH, he’s the perfect edition to the class. He has my vote.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
THX 0477

Twisted character and quite the convoluted situation. I’m not sure I followed it all, but there are a lot of possibilities. Might want to ease up on the semi-colon use—might be a bit overdone in this one, or not used quite right.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Gradual Uprising {LoA}

Love it…i can picture this guy completely!!!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
H.S. Wift

I have one important question. Admittedly, it’s only relevant if you win, but… what’s Victor’s surname?
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Mostly Harmless

It’s all in the first paragraph H.S – I’ve christened him Victor Higgins.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
H.S. Wift

Oh, I see it. I’m blind, sooo.

And no you didn’t, you named him Higson.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Mostly Harmless

It would appear I too have lost all powers of reading. Victor Higson. Glad that’s cleared up…
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
H.S. Wift

If I ever vanish from ficly, it’s because too much computer has made me dyslexic, and I can no longer read stuff. Oh, no! It’s happening!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Cary

Good story. Love the buildup. You do an excellent job of shaping his personality too.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
The Third Robot

I can’t even compete with this. Victor is the PERFECT addition to the class with his rat-like mind already amongst the mechanics and drama of the class.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
someday_93

I really like Victor…this is the first potential new character I’ve read, but I like it a lot! And Kristin totally would be running for class president!
- Posted almost 10 years ago.