Very nice continuation! I think I’ll let y’all continue this storyline and see where it goes. Unless I really, really want to write a sequel to a part of it.

Unfortunately this wont count as part of the contest unless you enter it on the contest page.

I do think that it’s possible for multiple sequels CR. I would like to see where this goes from two perspectives. That’s always a hoot.

I enjoy this continuation very much.

Only critique (and this is just me) would be that I think that sequels should be able to flow in a series, but also be able to stand out on there own so that a reader could fully comprehend the story without any previous knowledge. I think you achieve that for the most part, but there could be a little too much mystery.

CR – Since there are no actual dragons in this sequel, I think I’d rather just let it stand alone as it is. :)

TTR – I don’t really know how I feel about that. I think it comes down to personal preference. I actually kind of enjoy the stories that leave the reading hanging a bit for the next sequel.

Screw it, I’mma sequel this one.

You do a great job of capturing the sound and aura of good fantasy writing. I really enjoyed this one, especially the third paragraph.

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. :)

sequels don’t have to be made up of the same characters, we all add our own spins to make a huge awesome story. :) and this is awesome.

Glad you like! :-D

I <3 it

Nice to know you consider it an acceptable sequel. :)

really enjoyed this – but can’t help but wonder/muse…. how’d she know they’d be “something of value” in the chapel?…

At one time the chapel was central to the writings of the town and thus to the dragons. She figured that there were things buried in the rubble that had been overlooked by looters and such.