I’m in love with you. In a manly way.

Cool! I think that you yourself may be an intelligent reptile of sorts because this was very convincing. You aren’t harboring any significant secrets are you? and how on earth do you type!?

I’ve seen him do it. It takes time, but with a large keyboard, and very tactile claws, he’s gotten pretty fast. You should see him play DDR. Now that’s a feat.

Oh the bravery, kicking off your Ficly career with a piece of poetic prose… It’s a good thing you pull it off!

Feels like a prologue to some kind of epic fantasy – you certainly write with a good sense of scale (pardon the pun) – it feels weighty and important.

Good work, and welcome to Ficly – MH :)

This is fantastic. Finding out people’s variations of dragons is always interesting and this is a solid piece of writing along with it. I like the style you’ve gone for, treating them as more of an animal than a wise lore master or greedy thief, the two stereotypes that spring to my mind at the word ‘dragon’. The alternating paragraphs work beautifully, easy to follow and very engaging.

Beautiful, you have been my muse. You have turned a new page in my head and given me an idea on how to tackle this challenge.

I like the pacing a lot. It perfectly reflects the way tiny animals skitter about with caution.

What I love is the way the intelligence is presented. It’s a very good perspective piece, and the perspective feels truly alien.

Well I’m glad to see such positive reviews.
Thanks everyone. I like the world that it belongs to so I’ll try to sequel something out within the week.
The style is something I’ve tried before but I’m happy with the way this one turned out.

I love the style of this piece: something I haven’t seen in a while on ficly. Am anxious to watch you write further and welcome!

Lovely and lyrical, even if I’m not entirely sure who is who or what is what. Eh, poetry can be that way. I loved the meter and flow of the line about skyward, leftward, rightward.

Ahh, this is so cool! I especially love the third and fourth stanzas. Great job!

First Place goes to Magus Kyros for Era’s End. It’s a wonderful series of poetic prose, and a nice series that I hope he finishes soon.

Oh boy.
Thank you very much, and thank you again for all the nice words and comments.
As soon as school calms down I’ll be able to focus my attention on the series. Promise.