Haha we follow her thoughts as her head goes up into the clouds.

You play out the thought pattern very well. Good job on that. I was entertained.

The parts in italics confused me. Sometimes they were in first person and at other times in second slash third.

Besides the temporary confusion, I really like the self depricating thoughts of the class boff at the time of the dance. Nice work.

Good to see how people dream of breaking out of their boxes in their heads… Kristin’s no different I suppose!

I’m with PJ on the confusion over the italics, but I think I got the general message, which was a kind of sad one – prom’s not a night for everyone…

MH :)

I LOVE the fact that she’s trying to convince herself to dress to the theme so as not to “break the rules” even though she doesn’t like the theme. I cringe every time I read a Kristin story because I relate excrutiatingly well to her…