Good last line.
Why thank you! I was pretty pleased with it myself, especially as I added it on a whim. Wound up being a good final exchange.
Wow… This went CRAZY! This man is most definitely a psycho in my book.
I agree, orange. Someone needs to write a sequel immediately.
Okay, I’ve read a couple of your stories, and I can’t help but asking, You did mean that to be a combination of names from the Hitchiker’s Trilogy (Of 5 books), right?
To echo Orange: the doc’s a psycho! I’m on edge, here… somebody sequel soon!
Oy: I did indeed. I came up with it after an intense soul-searching period where I couldn’t think of anything better.
Hahaha. This is good. Great last lines. This sets up for a very intriguing story. Good job.
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