Ha! Well done, I thoroughly enjoyed this.

Oh bravo, it usually takes a while for the original entries to start coming in, but you’ve kicked things off with a real bang!

Well done on a great interpretation of the challenge – although, as always, your lack of clear paragraphing frustrates me – MH :)

Cute. It’s like all the loathing and bitterness of school put into a cute little fantasy story.

agreement with ed in this particular case:
paragraphs = clear reading.
People will enjoy the content more if it’s clearly spaced.
Proof that we’re decended from apes! LOL!
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I like this immensely! They are both objects of loathing. :)