Yes, I wrote this entire thing just so I could use the phrase, “Screw you! I’m a dragon!”

Very good. I like the arrogant disposition of the dragon you present. That’s how I think dragons would think.

I smell an epic saga brewing. I think that I may have to contribute.

The screw you line was perfect.

Yes, this was a very enjoyable addition to this little saga. I’m already thinking about my next sequel.

This is a great series with definite hints of Paolini. The last line of this story is a bit Princess Leia, but I love this genre and I’ll be looking forward to more sequels! I like how you move along the characterization of the dragon and her wise mentor.

Haha, I hadn’t thought about that “only hope” bit, but yes it does sound a bit like starwars. I’m not sure how I feel about being compared to Paolini. He’s a decent writer, but Eragon always rubbed me the wrong way.

Thanks for the compliments, and I’m looking forward to where this goes as well.

hey I wrote about a dragon on Ficlets and it was not like Eragon though in my head, I kept thinking, ’don’t write this like Eragon, don’t write this like Eragon’. Paolini used many elements from classic tales to build his. I don’t think we can help but be contrasted.

oh and here’s another perfect example of character addition to a series. :)

Haha thanks. I’m thinking that the character set is now pretty good to go. Have to get back to the main plot sometime.

Fun back and forth. Nice job on the dialog that worked and felt real despite the fantastic setting. Nice ending.

Thanks! For some reason, whenever I read the owls dialog out loud, I draw the who’s out into whooooooooo’s and give him a British accent. I blame the old BBC version of Narnia.

I reread the story with the owl voice.

I officially grant you a 6/5.

I dig the attitude of the dragon. Always think of them as majestic, wise. Enjoying one with a bit of immaturity.

… I see that I will need to read the rest in the series and catch up….