Very well done. It’s funny and refreshing and the dialogue is comical, though a little bit cliched. The second last paragraph could use some buffing, it’s lacking in some necessary punctuation.
Very well done. It’s funny and refreshing and the dialogue is comical, though a little bit cliched.
The second last paragraph could use some buffing, it’s lacking in some necessary punctuation.
Cute and amusing intearction, though it would have been easier to follow with paragraph breaks with each new line of dialog from a different person, bit of a writing convention/rule. Still funny and amusing stuff. I like the two characters.
The Third Robot 
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