Comments on Meaningless Together by The Fantastic Mister Fish

The Red Death

omg epic love
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Elisabeth L. Davis(LoA)

<3 This is awesome
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Lighty

This is at once so positive and depressing. The ‘voice’ of the narrator comes across strongly, I kinda wish for punctuation but can see why you didn’t. Very sparse, reflects the character well. Nicely done.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
ElshaHawk (LoA)

sweet, yet sour. If you love, then nothing else matters. And the world won’t feel it, but someone will. I just think you’re focusing on the wrong things.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Mr.Gabriel

Awe. I love, love. <3
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

stunning, this is what i want my life to be: beautiful, meaningless and underrated
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Ruby Slippers

Refreshing view of the cliche “time wasted is not wasted time.” I appreciate the point of view of the narrator, but I have to say that there’s enough bitterness that leaks in that I’m not sure the narrator is entirely content with the situation. (Maybe I’m just reading too much into it.)
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Music-Hearted

Bittersweet. I absolutely love it.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
someday_93

I ditto PJ’s comment.
This is beautiful.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
The Fantastic Mister Fish

@lighty
who said that there was any character?
- Posted almost 9 years ago.