Captured a moment that I’m sure many people have experienced and you do it very well.

Agreed, a nice vignette. I would love for the hints of what’s come before or of where they’re going to have more weight, but I guess that’s what sequels are for, no?

Thank you for the comments. I wasn’t sure how this would work because it’s such a genre shift for me, but I think I like how it turned out.