I don’t know about you, but I’ve never been at ease with the opposite genre.

I had a go, bear in mind how hard it is for me.

Good story, I like the ending.

Otherwise good job on stepping out of your comfort zone.

WELL DONE!! I genuinely expected a murder or something knowing your writing style. You did great stepping out of your comfort zone although I agree with Robot on the negatives.
You might have a talent for romance yet. (wink)
Abby x

Oh, beautiful. And in English (which you are) grammar it’s meaningful, not like the American which seems to literally say full of meaning.

You’ve got some major grammar thingies going on here. The biggest one I can see is this sentence: “Have you ever loved someone so much that when you are around her?” It’s a bit of a fragment.

Then here: "Courage hit me on the head a while later, though. The school trip to Brittany, nearing the end. " Is really stilted. You might combine the two sentences, or rearrange them to flow better.

Other than that, it’s not a bad story.

Wait PJ… still just meaningful (one l) even for us Americans. I agree with the other comments, but I must say I love the ending. I seems cynical, that all we can hope for is our love to be recognized, not reciprocated, but I appreciate that sentiment.

Damn, must have happened with the purging, I’ll correct (if I have enough characters.