Tells a lot about why she dislikes her situation so much, the capriciousness of the demand to read what sounds like a nearly pointless tome. Lots of typos and little grammar things that were distracting though. Cool title for the book, definitely.

I guess the miserable old fart doesn’t believe in hands-on education. :) Great book title!

I’m glad there’s enough humour in here to tell us that she isn’t going to do anything awful to the bird, just get a little revenge…!

It does add to Lenora and Thaddeus’ characters, but at the same time I kind of want something to happen now – some kind of action is definitely needed if this series is going to stay fresh…

Good work, but maybe needed a little more pizzaz – MH :)

I’m sorry, I can’t give a serious comment, I’m laughing too much at the title.

hmm… yes i see what you mean MH. I was really trying to play the entire story around the book in a way, and I wanted to have her get pushed over the edge.