You just poemed his poem. Can’t say I have seen a poem sequel by a different author, though I am still new here.

Only critique would be that at times the cadence seems a little off and disjointed.

I deleted my comment that you commented on about my comment being deleted.

I’m very new here as well, so I don’t know how prevalent poeming poems is.
I see what you mean about the cadence, but I’m not sure how to fix it. It also depends on your pacing when you read it.

I deleted the comment of me commenting about you commenting on the comment that I deleted before the comment you deleted.

Oh no! My poem just got poemed!

I’m also pretty new (not as new as you CR so I get the point and laugh privileges. Me and TR seem to have joined the same day, but my first story was rated better than his, so I can point and laugh at him, too.) I haven’t seen a poeming of a poem yet either.

I quite liked the repitition in the last line of each verse. The they -, they - pattern for the start made me think of the new army ad campaign.

I decided to not be as childish as you too and not bother to comment on the comment of TR commenting about CR commenting on the comment thet TR deleted about the comment CR deleted.

That gave me a nosebleed.

Alrighty. I edited it to hopefully flow better. What you think?