Comments on Flying by The Note Writer

Jim Stitzel

I think this would actually have more impact without that final splat. :)

This is Icarus gone horribly awry.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
thelostgirl

Short, simple and sweet. Really loved this little piece. Plus, it made me laugh.

I like the ‘splat’. Sound effects are cool :)
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 1 out of 5
thelostgirl

And I’m not sure why Ficly keeps making me rate stories with one out of five even though I haven’t actually selected any pencils. Sorry ’bout that Note Writer.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 1 out of 5
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

Rectifying lostgirl’s mistake with the pencils…
I liked it but agree that it would be improved without the ‘SPLAT!’
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
H.S. Wift

I would of preferred it without the splat, but I still enjoyed the story. Working to rectify thelostgirl’s mistake again.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Crown Me Tarzan, King of Mars

Maybe he could have trained harder?
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Glow

Hm… I think I have to disagree with the consensus here. I feel like the splat gives it a sense of closure (and comedy) that you lose without it.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.