Like Cinderella: you can have your wish but only till this time. I think it’s fantastic!

Very good. Your descriptions seem to tap into that half-remembered dream that everyone has had in some point in their life. I really enjoyed it.

I like random gifts of flight. Very nice.

One quick comment; there’s a bit of tense mix-up in the second from last paragraph where ‘I was’ becomes ‘I am’.

Liked the rhyme of swoop and loop too. Nice entry :)

fixed.

I love this. It’s almost a modern fairy tale.