This doesn’t sound to good.Although I did love the story.

OH MY DEAR!

oh gosh! why doesn’t she just grab the wheel!!!

Just finished the series. Great job so far, but some of it seems a bit disconnected and random.

It’s up to you, but I would write down a few key plot points you want to incorporate and stick to it, that way you have a solid and consistent plot. Just watch your dialogue as well, because there are some times where the responses don’t match the previous dialogue.

But great work overall, hoping to see more soon!

I’ve reread my series a dozen times and I think the plot is perfectly connected and moving along well. Of course some unexpected and random things have to happen to keep the story moving.

As for the dialogue, I’m not exactly sure where it don’t match, but if they don’t then it’s probably because something must’ve been said between the sequel and prequel.

ah ficly, the place where if you write a series, you understand the dynamics, but if you don’t, you just don’t GET it.

So I’ve been following this story for a few days now. I’m just wondering; writing a sequel anytime soon? The cliffhanger is KILLING me.
Just sayin’. :)
Great story!

So I’ve been following this story for a few days now. I’m just wondering; writing a sequel anytime soon? The cliffhanger is KILLING me.
Just sayin’. :)
Great story!

So I’ve been following this story for a few days now. I’m just wondering; writing a sequel anytime soon? The cliffhanger is KILLING me.
Just sayin’. :)
Great story!

So I’ve been following this story for a few days now. I’m just wondering; writing a sequel anytime soon? The cliffhanger is KILLING me.
Just sayin’. :)
Great story!

I’m working on the sequel.

This guy is insane and drunk and high and just generally off his head :P