Dialogue driven stories aren’t my favorite, but this one is followable and gets across the gist rather well.

Ha… Craigslist…

Very strong dialouge. You can get the feel of his past in a short amount of time. Excellent.

Though, you should only use three dots and no comma is needed after “Michael” in the first line.

Thanks guys. I don’t do drafts, so punctuation and misspellings often get past me. As for dialogue driven stories, I’m not very good at third person narratives, so rather than doing everything in the first person I try to do these dialogue-based stories every once in a while. Keeps me from being too lazy.

Thanks again for the input, much appreciated.