This is kind of neat. Not what I expected anyway. I’m definitely interested in the back story or evening going forward!

Ooh, Ogden sounds super cute… in a weird, mutant creationy kind of way :)

Nice entry dude, good to see you’re still about on Ficly.

Came for Pterodactyl reference and left satisfied.

For real though, this was pretty great.

Very nice description, though I think weight may be a problem for Ogden. With flying creatures, less is more.

I don’t know if you have enough characters, but separating your paragraphs would help the aesthetic a bit.

Cool, reminds me of a Chimera -like creature… like the idea… would’ve liked more plot, and so forth

That’s… a lot of wings for such a little body. Something tells me Ogden will be eating all the other flyers.