Three things.

1) Thank God someone sequeled my story. I seem to be notorious for killing them.

2) Not the direction I was expecting to be taken. (As in Quentin and Piano Joe and possibly the barman are intrinsic to the place so the loss of one would be rather traumatic)

3) #2 is beside the point though because this was a very well delivered story. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Well Done.

I wanted to sequel but I think that’s a perfect ending…

hey at least the seed was planted for usurption! :) I’m not sure the heckling fits, they were all just quaking in their boots at Quentin, and he’s had a history of killing, I’d still tread on eggshells, but then maybe I’m too overly cautious. :) When they started heckling, I’d be sneaking out the back!

I would agree with you at first Elsha, but this is also the first time any of them had ever seen him miss.

Elsha! You should sequel your thoughts – I don’t want this to end, and I’d love to see what happens if a character did sneak out the back. viva la revolution!

Funny moment. It’s a bit light-hearted compared to how some of the other bits have been, but I like the whole uneasy moment of one guy starting the mocking, everyone joining in, and then oops…shouldn’t have said that.