This is my last attempt at this assignment! It is making me loopy.

Very good! You made snort sandwich through my nose.

I was expecting something intense, and it was!

Intense, dramatic, and then thorougly amusing. I was a little confused at first, as I thought the time on a mission was the time before the one you are talking about here. Not sure how to clear that up, but it’s a minor point. Nice descriptions and fluid action.

Thanks for reading! This is actually based on a true story, but we weren’t so single-minded about it. Still fun, though.

Not sure how to clear up the time thing either, but I see what you mean. I will ponder what you’re pondering and see what I can do.