Wow .

Tragic and dramatic. A bit over the top with teh meteor (?) causing the death, but it did set up a very dramatic moment for the challenge.

It wasn’t a meteor… it was the toilet seat from the Mir space station. Didn’t you people watch Dead Like Me?

Great work.

I LOVE DEAD LIKE ME and was thinking the EXACT same thing!!!
Quick but tragic tale. :)

Haha. Dead Like Me was a brilliant show. To bad it got canceled. :(

The picture that you paint of the relationship is very nice and I think that, unfortunately, the meteor overwhelms it.

I had to stay true to my roots.

The first paragraph was not as compelling as the rest of the story. Something about the structure made it less powerfull to me. Otherwise, I liked this. I always enjoy a good love story.

When I first read it, I thought it was fire raining from the sky in the end times. In any case, it’s a neat story.

It’s a really neat story indeed, and, weird though this may sound, I especially liked the title.

Exceptional imagery. Really liked it. Minor text mistakes like “did’t” but that’s all.