Cool! This is going somewhere fascinating. Very well done. I got a-quiver with excitement when I read the title and you deliver it excellently.

I like the description of bravery of the people, and their willingness to keep coming at him despite his sharp shooting. also,

Loved it. Not your usual style, I felt, which surprised me. The simple sentences fit really nicely with teh feel of the situation, these people only half coming out of the daze, finally breaking free but not in an articulate way, just mindless violence.

Perfect.

Wow, thanks a lot guys.
Somebody keep it going! We still need to find out who Elsha’s madman is.
And what the heck is up with this place anyway?

Blimey this is good!

I’m afraid I lost touch with this series for a while but this both sums up what’s happened so far and sets the story on it’s course beautifully…

Well done indeed – if no-one sequels I think this is still a fitting end – MH :)