Well written an flawless, however it seems a little typical and lacks flair.

Beautiful, but just a little cliche maybe. I liked it though, it had a sort of lilting quality to it.

Yeah, I know what you guys mean by ‘typical’ and ‘cliche’. I wasn’t feeling very inspired yesterday, but I felt bad that I hadn’t written anything in a while, so I wrote the first thing that came to mind. Thanks for the feedback, though. I always appreciate it. :)