Yikes, that is the meanest, angriest mirror I’ve ever read about. Very nice job being in the character voice of this very bitter vantage point.

Harsh.

Wow, that was chilling. You nailed the superior, alien attitude of your subject. Nice twist on the original story. Very, very good.

whoa, evil mirror! Though sometimes when you look at someone so vain, you want to knock them down a notch or two. :)

Nice perspective & personification. But I felt the line “just you denying your true image”, was too much explanation (telling, rather than showing). Other than that, great stuff!

Nice use of descriptive adjectives. Gives the mirror a deep personality (for one so shallow).

I really like how you turned the mirror into something more than just a mirror. SO judging!

Well written, poetic even, in places like…
“You steal my silver solitude to gaze upon yourself in harsh fluorescence.”