i thought they were going outside, turns out they were going inside.. Will the insulation hide the smell of human?
Has a little Pit and the Pendulum mojo to it.
@ElshaHawk Actually I had kind of assumed that they were coming into the building and there would be a confrontation but maybe that’ll change. @stargazer Hey thanks. Our teacher in Rhetoric class read that (or maybe it was only part of it) out loud and it was pretty intense.
@ElshaHawk Actually I had kind of assumed that they were coming into the building and there would be a confrontation but maybe that’ll change.
@stargazer Hey thanks. Our teacher in Rhetoric class read that (or maybe it was only part of it) out loud and it was pretty intense.
Cool, calm, and collected, but still with a hint of simmering irritation. Nice job on the mood in this little bit.
THX may now consider himself seconded, also appreciating the touch you gave it with Sloppy.
Good descriptions, but the two and a half minutes kind of cuts down on the imminency of danger. Although, that might be explained as to how he had that much time in later sequels?