Definitely a good description of the immobilizing sort of frustration and lack of hope. That middle sentence felt a little awkward with the ‘always used to be’ strung together. Otherwise some great description in the beginning and end bits, especially how you set up that the sleep wasn’t really all that comfortable with the aching muscles and bones then flipped it into being the most comfortable thing about his life at that point.
N. Robertson
stargazer1960
THX 0477