I like this. I think that it captures a reality that many women face daily. Well executed.

ABUSE!

Excited, ‘cause I’m in a period of obsession with abuse.

Very sad and very tragic, definitely gets across the darker side of growing up too fast and getting into this sort of situation. I like to think the fact that Liza lives int eh mirror means there is some hope for Jen, but maybe I’m just an optimist that way.

This is so sad… so true

Nicely done with the switch of persons. Only thing that bugged me was the word ‘eyes’ being used twice in proximity.

I’m not sure how many people end up being everything they wanted to be but I doubt it is very many. I bet most of us are happy that we ended up with some of the qualities that we imagined for ourselves, oh so long ago. Great work as always.