Comments on Ignite Jealousy In The Halls (one sentence) by ElshaHawk (LoA)

Gradual Uprising {LoA}

Very well written!

This floods the whole scene with jealousy. I imagine everyone in the school is feeling it either towards the girl or ‘the King’. (Especially the narrator)
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Paige Elizabeth

In one sentence you have managed to capture the High School Hallway Parade experience.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)

Dang did this win the challenge if not who was the winner, elmore leonard?
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

bows thank you, thank you.
- Posted over 9 years ago.