Omg. Tension filled ficly!

I liked the repetition too and how you did “show not tell”

Wonderful! :D

I agree. The repetition was just enough to create that tension that was needed. Good one!

Creepy and unsettling. Really felt like it could have gone in a lot of different directions right up unto the end.
The end came a bit abruptly, but I know how that character limit can be.