I like this, but I get more of a despair feeling than a jealously feeling. But I see where you were trying to go.

I understand this, and think it was a good attempt (and worth more than a 3) ;)

I agree with horror, this seems more like regret rather than jealousy.

Thank you for your input. If I have the time and opportunity, I’ll re-enter the challenge.
“It’s not about winning- it’s about understanding why we lost.”

Ouch, that one was really painful. nice description.

i think it’s the acceptance at the end that makes it feel less like jealousy.