SPIDERS!
Or maybe mansquito. I should have known.
Paragraphs are your friend sir.

Paragraphs are indeed your friends.
This is an interesting start to something. Looking forward to more.

I know I should have paragraphs, but I want to fit as much into each one as I can. I’ll try for future stories.

You have about 5 characters left. that should be enough to add a few paragraphs.

Something like that?

Works for me.

Chilling idea that he’s praying for the girl to be dead, for her sake. At first it comes across like he’s just cynical, but the end it becomes clear that something really freaky is out there.

Very good turn…we start shaping what the lieutenant is thinking, but it turns out he’s in a whole nuther ballpark.

My first thought was vampires. :D Yeah, I’m crypt-crazy.

Just ignore me.

But more legs? Eww.