…and then a giant 12 legged mucus-dripping ball of fangs jumped at her from the shadows? what happens next?

I might be up for writing a sequel

naw…i think i’ll wait one more, someone else take this moment, then i’ll go

I like the idea of another party involved. I wouldn’t mind you writing parallel to my story at all. Can’t wait to see what’s next.

Great descriptions. You fit a lot into a small space and left me wanting more.